Staring into my eyes reflected in a pond with fishes so fishy
With stresses and frustrations drenching me
Searching for an answer deep inside the glassy water
Memories of childhood came swirling to me
I recall my childhood carefree and young
Full of life and full of fun
Running and playing as the day passed by
Warm beneath the blazing sun
Life was simple to this bold little child
The small world in his hands
Conquering challenges ,it was simple
With a child’s heart walking the lands
I stare at the reflection with the pond looking back
The eyes so tired on me
Where is that child my eyes don’t reveal?
The pond has no answer you see
This child’s in our heart pumping life into us
Creating the answers we ask why
For that precious child I must seek no more
For that precious child is still I
I wrote this poem a few weeks ago while returning from indore. this is my first poem like a real poem and though this poem doesnt reflect the real me, Its about how to go about ur problems in your day to day life. I would want to accept that the basic idea of 'solving ur problem like a child' was from an article i had read previously , i got inspired by it and wanted to pen down the idea like a poem. so the actual poem is my own creation. write ur comments as well...
regards
gokul
dont forget to read 'the beginning' post ...
ReplyDeletethere is a link in the blog archive,(to the left)
Hey...seems a good start...my wishes to u to write more..do consult ur mom abt the so-called grammatical mistakes...hehee...just kidding...dude u rock..:)
ReplyDeletethanks sis :)
ReplyDeleteVery good start..... u found the new talent in u that u can write a poem also. thats gr8. very good start. we can say that it is ur 1st poem. write more........ we r ready to read........ not only now always.......
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ReplyDeletemmmmmm.....a poem of one's own is not something simple....gre8
ReplyDeletethe poem is really good... n btw y to indore..?
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