MY LOVE- A POEM

I was within her, so was she

It was love at first sight; a heavenly sort.

In those days, her words though mystic like that of a banshee

Was like a euphony, drenching my heart.

When her scent came to my senses

My face brightened, a smile curled upon my lips easy.

At those ravishing moments when her soft kisses

Filled my cheeks, my soul felt ecstasy.

I kept running around her like a merry-go-round

As though she was my world.

Years passed by, as we were bound;

With love and care emanating multi fold.

I trembled; there was darkness everywhere to fear

Her hands grasped mine, leading me out of my shackles.

The wide world barked,” you can’t lift a spear”

While she said , “ you are my Achilles”.

Im deeply in love with u, my dear mom.

this is a quick fire poem compared to my older one which i took days to construct, hence this poem might be less on vocab and construction.... but anyways there are no hard rules regarding poems as the lines need not necessarily be grammatically correct.... let me explain the poem in case u misunderstood any of the lines..... the first line says that i was inside the womb of my mom (my love) and so was she ... coz... in my blood and genes... and that scent doesnt mean the perfume but her body odour... and achilles is a greek hero who is a great warrior... and all the above lines are about my mom....

hope u liked my poem... do write ur comments and suggestions....