Monday, April 26, 2010

You make my life worth living

My life was a Microprocessor
seared with disgust , fear;
when you arrived my friend , my philosopher
rejuvenated with rejoice; pumped up like a beer;

As my hand hung over your shoulders
A gallon of courage seeps into my blood
I feel, I can take on the undertaker or for any boulders
adrenaline flowing through my veins like flood

My feet twitched, I was drowning fast
under a sea of troubles and pain.
I was on the look out; you were nowhere to be seen, felt aghast..
Then I realized, you were pushing me out, immersing yourself under the treachery marine.

Fools said, "love is superior to friendship clan"
friendship, the pure form of love without lust
pleasure, satisfaction what you gave is more than
what sex could provide just

You pamper me like a mother
guide me as a dad
petty crimes and we are together
Ah! what more to say; my chest is heavy though Im glad

machi, you make my life worth living!!


hope you liked my poem... ill explain certain parts which u might have misunderstood...the microprocessor in the first line has several meanings....1.like a device which gives output when input is given 2. microprocessor subject 3. class 4.lab...... and undertaker is a famous wwf champion.... and here boulders does not signify its exact meaning but something like a giant etc.. and then in the third para.. im drowning under a sea which is compared to troubles and and at first i cant find u and then later i come to know that u are helping me by putting urself in the troubles or here the sea... and the rest are simple.. please send in ur comments and suggestions... keep reading


10 comments:

  1. nice gokul keep going

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  3. nice style....not an exception from your previous ones....another feather added to ur cap da machi....

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  4. marvelous.......
    no one in our family writes poem. we all proud of u. hats off to all ur poem, story & a beautiful narration of ur childhood incident.
    keep going.......

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  5. romba overu.... avalavula worth ila akka....

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  6. good one machi keep going..
    to be true i never expected u had this kinda talent....

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  7. Machi u rock..but microprocessor la rmba knowledge irukura mari buildup kodukureya da...i dint expect such thing from u...hats off dude... :) :)

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  8. vidhya -you make pyari's life worth living

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